• leafling@lemmy.world
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    1 year ago

    Nice. A story that’s almost all good, natural-sounding dialogue, and the only description is also the climax. I think the lack of description really makes it feel immediate and snappy.

    This is also definitely a fantasy that everyone who’s struggled with negative thoughts can relate to.

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      1 year ago

      Thanks! I’m not a writer but stumbled across the post and knew immediately I wanted to give this a shot.