Nice. A story that’s almost all good, natural-sounding dialogue, and the only description is also the climax. I think the lack of description really makes it feel immediate and snappy.
This is also definitely a fantasy that everyone who’s struggled with negative thoughts can relate to.
Nice. A story that’s almost all good, natural-sounding dialogue, and the only description is also the climax. I think the lack of description really makes it feel immediate and snappy.
This is also definitely a fantasy that everyone who’s struggled with negative thoughts can relate to.
Thanks! I’m not a writer but stumbled across the post and knew immediately I wanted to give this a shot.